ext_33846 ([identity profile] caedn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rheasilvia 2006-05-15 12:38 am (UTC)

I love the innuendo in this. Nothing is spelled out but, as you read, it gathers like a cloud in the back of your mind, rains for a while and then clears by the end. It's a very refreshing change from the majority of fanfic writing where things are spelt out.

Just as an addition, I found the imagery of Sam taking his rage and grief out on the car as particularly breathtaking and simultaneously gutwrenching. Amazing writing.


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