i... i don't know what to say. it's such a douchey thing on my part because as a writer i love when people quote stuff and tell me which parts made them ~feel~ but that's pretty much impossible here because EVERY SINGLE FUCKING WORD. i must have been flailing to four different people in im and i blew off making dinner and breathing during certain parts and just. ryo's narrative. i want to say it's like what twilight was supposed to be, all real-time and choppy.

AND NAKAMARU WAS AWESOME. *_* HE HAD A CAT. :D

please never stop writing.