Oh god. This was fucking gorgeous and absolutely brilliant. I wish I could give you a more coherent and articulate comment saying all the awesome things you did with this fic, but, really, I would end up quoting your entire story. And that's the thing, you had a great plotline, undercover cops at a gay bdsm club, it really does not get better than that (and I usually don't read bdsm, but my god you made it hot) and characters that actually feel like real people because you are so great at writing out their thought processes.
I loved how you wrote Junno and Ryo. Junno because he isn't all sunshine and smiles and terrible jokes, because he is more than that and I appreciated how you incorporated that. Especially when you wrote about how he was when he was talking about his dead partner, my heart just kind of broke because that side of Junno I love. And Ryo, my god your Ryo. His voice was so him throughout the entire fic. I also loved how you included Shingo and Ohkura, you really made me see them and it was hot.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it was wonderfully written and executed, and I'll probably need to read this again just so I can appreciate everything.
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I loved how you wrote Junno and Ryo. Junno because he isn't all sunshine and smiles and terrible jokes, because he is more than that and I appreciated how you incorporated that. Especially when you wrote about how he was when he was talking about his dead partner, my heart just kind of broke because that side of Junno I love. And Ryo, my god your Ryo. His voice was so him throughout the entire fic. I also loved how you included Shingo and Ohkura, you really made me see them and it was hot.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it was wonderfully written and executed, and I'll probably need to read this again just so I can appreciate everything.