ext_24001 ([identity profile] ununoriginal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rheasilvia 2009-06-01 07:34 am (UTC)

tat was so fahsbliunar;giubnawfugbvaldfhbnasfldkobnfj;b i went into this blind, not realising its length and OMG WAT A FANTASTICALLY BRILLIANT WAY to have spent 2 hours of my life.

i noe ryo and junno have their connection-point from a drama they did way back, but apart from tat, they appear to move in their own spheres, but u so totally make them work. ur junno, like in ur previous story, is beautiful, gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous, and very much in character - ppl love to focus on his dajare-appearance, but he is, which u have shown so well, so much more dimensionally complex than tat. in fact, ur junno is one of the best i've ever read, and this story has entirely blown my mind to bits!

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