ryo's narrative. i want to say it's like what twilight was supposed to be, all real-time and choppy.

I haven't read Twilight, but I will take that as a high compliment. :-) I'm very glad that Ryo's voice worked so well for you!

Yes, Nakamaru has a long-haired, pampered and arrogant cat who rules over the family with an iron paw. And Maru himself is indeed awesome - the best research and requisitions officer far and wide. Because details are important, and he *gets* that, and makes sure his detectives get it too, whether they want to or not. *g*

Thank you for your lovely feedback -I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! :-)