The fact that Hakkai was the instigator is a refreshing little touch.

It actually surprises me that Aggressive!Hakkai isn't found more often in the wilds of fanfic... but maybe it's just me. ;-)

Yes, they are terrible fucked up, aren't they - which I suspect is a large part of the attraction for me.

You're very welcome - thank *you* for your lovely feedback! It's great to hear that Gojyo worked the way I wanted him to. :-)