JE Fanfic: First Contact

[rheasilvia]

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit m/m sex. Also, bondage.
Story notes: AU, slightly more than 31,000 words. Various other JE characters – as well as two non-JE ones – appear in supporting roles.
Betaed by: diamondsofsix, k_julia and solo____ – all of whom helped immeasurably. Thank you very much! This story would be very different – and much worse – without you. solo____ deserves special thanks for going above and beyond.

Summary:
Detectives Nishikido Ryo and Taguchi Junnosuke go undercover in a gay BDSM club run by the mob. Ryo is not happy about this, though not for the reasons you might expect.


First Contact


As always, feedback of all kinds – positive and negative – is very much appreciated!

Comments

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much! :-) And it's great that the characterization of these AU versions of Junno and Ryo works so well for you. For me, characterization is the most important thing in AU stories - when the circumstances have changed, it's especially important that the characters are recognizably and believably themselves, though of course appropriately different because of the different circumstances. If that makes sense. *g*

And the puns - yes! :-) Policeman!Junno is a little more restrained than Idol!Junno when it comes to puns - but there are puns in Ryo's future, believe me. *g*

I just needed to look where I knew your writing from - the Taguchi-falling-in-Love-fic, ne?

Yep, that was me. :-)

[triela-gg.livejournal.com]

Yes, that totally makes sense^^
(sadly not many writers really do that.. makes me appreciate them who do even more <3)

Ah, yes~
I read the fic and I was like - "weeeh~, it's Junno, there have to be more puns!" Then slowly my brain started working again and I though about where he could have said an additional pun. Yeah, pretty much nowhere. Where it was possible, you had him say one, or grin, or just show it in his eyes <3

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Where it was possible, you had him say one, or grin, or just show it in his eyes

:-) Can't get the punning out of any version of Junno...

There was actually one more pun - the lost pun! When Junno and Ryo are about to head into the dungeon and Shingo asks them if they're planning anything special, Junno giggles because of an internal pun that he just barely manages to hold back... I originally wrote it in, but it doesn't fit the story, because he wouldn't voice it just then.

And then I forgot what it was. O_O I know! But Junno remembers. :-)

[triela-gg.livejournal.com]

"Can't get the punning out of any version of Junno"

Uhm, because it wouldn't be Junno anymore without any puns *laughs*
(especially after I read about his appearance at Kanjani8-concert *laughs*)

*nod* He could not voice it in that situation.
Too sad ;_;
Haha, as long as Junno remembers... Maybe he'll tell you again~