rheasilvia | A Comedy of Errors

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A Comedy of Errors

Or: Nishikido Ryo's Life as a Korean Drama. Featuring an annoying cast of practical jokers, Eito with an unhealthy interest in other people's love lives, and compulsive snugglers.

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by:

solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Originally written for the

je_fqfest 2009 for

diamondsofsix. Slightly less than 8.000 words.

Summary: It's all Pi's fault... Pi and his stupid pranks. Because instead of Ryo's bag and Ryo's bed, Room 8 holds a horde of loud and drunken KinKi Kids and Arashi members, none of whom are in any state to question, although the loudest and most drunken one does try to get Ryo in a headlock and/or offer him some sake.

A Comedy of Errors

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:-)) Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. And that it was hot! *g*

I'm really glad you like my Junno - and the fic, and the smut. :-) Thank you for letting me know!

Thank you very much for letting me know you liked the story! :-) I'm really glad you liked it so much.

Junno was so so cute in this fic and Ryo too.

That's why they go so well together... well. Part of the reason. :-)

Unpopular pair, first time to read something about them but I liked it.

That's great to hear! :-) It is an unusual pairing - but I find that once the thought of it takes hold, it's hard to escape. Not that I tried very hard.

Yay! I'm really glad the hotness worked so well for you - I'm always a little uncertain whether my sex scenes work, so this is great to hear. And that it was cute, too! :-)

Thank you for your feedback - I'm very happy you enjoyed the story!

Yay! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much. Thank you very much for letting me know! :-)

And I find that Junno really grows on you if you give him a chance. Like some kind of very cute, very bendy fungus with a penchant for puns. ;-)

Yes, the pairing really is unusual (which I personally find very sad, but then, I'm biased *g*). I'm very glad you gave the story a chance anyway, and liked it when you did! Thank you for letting me know. :-)

They are so cute together ne..and the flow's very good ^ ^
I really miss you and your story <333 (so sad I don't have much time to visit lj like before)

*hugs and ♥*

Yay - I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much! :-) And the fluff and the plotting and the puns! *g*

Was reading this with a friend and several times I had to facepalm because of the puns.

Heh. Exactly the effect Junno and I were going for! Puns are best when they make you wince in pain and horror even while you laugh. *g*

JUNNO PLANNED THIS WHOLE THING, DIDN'T HE.

But how could you think such a thing! Really, he is the soul of innocence. And anyway, it's not like Ryo's complaining, is it?

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!

Yay! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much - and that it cracked you up, and you liked the meddli8ng Eito and Junno's puns, and that the sex was hot! *g*

And I'm really happy about this in particular:
You make RyoxJunno my secret OTP.

YES! Ryo/Junno for the win! :-)

Please write more forever and ever

I'll definitely be writing them for a while longer! :-) I'm very glad you like them - and my stories - so much. Thank you for your lovely feedback!

They are indeed very cute together. And singly, too. :-)

Thank you for your lovely feedback - I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :-)

I really miss you and your story

Ack, no time for fandom? That sucks. But drop by whenever you do have the time to visit LJ. I'll be here! :-)

*blush* Wow, thank you! I am very very happy that you enjoyed the story so much! :-)

ryo-- this being in his perspective makes me want to squish him forever, bastard who isn't really much of one after all
No, Ryo really isn't a bastard at all... he's very squishable. He just can't show his soft fluffy core without a lot of kicked-up fuss and diversionary gruffness.

ohkura deserves a special mention because OH BUT HE'S A DOLL all concerned about and protective over junno and ohkura ilyyyy
Ohkura is a really great friend to have! He wants Junno to be happy, so Ryo'd better watch himself. Ryo isn't mean-spirited in the least, but - well, let's just say he's not necessarily the first on the clue bus when it comes to people, most of the time. ;-)

JUNNO. ... I LOVE HIM probably as much as i do the real thing
That's an amazing compliment, and just wonderful to hear!

i guess it's because of YOUR love for the man that he's so entirely lovable in your fics, too
I certainly do think he's awesome, and fascinating, and multi-faceted and sweet and sharp and dorky and complex and so much more than he may seem at first glance - and if that comes through in my stories, then that is... well, awesome. :-)

your writing. is so easy to read, not because it's simple, but because it's so fluid and then cuts through just at the right moments
*blush* You are going to make me conceited!

THE SEX, AS ALWAYS
I usually find porn one of the most difficult things to get right, and am never entirely sure if it works the way I want it to. But judging by your reaction, it does seem to be, so - just, yay!

i've always been intrigued by ryo/junno but you--you've given an addiction.
YES! Then I've definitely been doing something right. *g* I've been addicted to those two for what seems like a long, long time, and it feels much better knowing there are other people out there just as hooked as I am.

PS. this is prolly just the junda (and former ryoda) fangirl in me but "dolphin prince" = OH, YOU TWO.
Yay for the Dolphin Prince! I love that you liked that. :-) But why does it remind you of Junda and/or Ryoda? I think I'm missing something here...

Thank you again for your lovely feedback!

Also: Your icon is made of awesome. :-)

Very, very lovely written.
I've never watched a Korean dorama before, but I really loved the pace of your fic.
Choice of words was wonderful, same goes for sentence structures.

For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.

AND: I had wet eyes in the last scene (okay, second to last). Wonderful ending there.

Oh: and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out. ^^;;

First I have to say: I love you for writing this!
When I first saw this pop up in the K8-forum I wasn't really in the mood to read anything. But then I saw your name and thought "wasn't that the author of 'first contact'?" Which meant that I had to read it. That one was epic porn. This was epic cuteness, WITH porn! Amazing porn!
I wanted to list some favourite things but the list became almost as long as the story itself. XD Like:

Maybe it's Jin, that would be cool –
The bed's occupant rolls over and squints at him vaguely. It's Taguchi.
Hell, whatever. That works too.

or

"Where'd Taguchi find your necklace?" Yoko asks, while Ryo puts it on.
"I guess it must have come off in bed," says Ryo. And no wonder, with all the cuddling Taguchi does.
When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.
Oh.
Fuck.

This is pure win!

"No, wait! I have a plan. You're messing up my plan!"
"Shut up, you idiot," Junno murmurs against his mouth.

And when Junno wants another round. OMG I almost died!
"But when we wake up we..." Junno starts hopefully

And the parts with the rest of K8 LOOOOOOOVE!!! Subaru FTW!

Ok, I'm gonna stop now. But I was so happy to read something of yours again so you can't really blame me for rambling... ^.~

I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much! :-) And knowing Korean dramas really wasn't meant to be a necessary prerequisite for this story - I think anyone who's seen any soaps or read any romance novels should get the idea. *g*

For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.

That's a wonderful compliment! I know the phenomenon you mean... I, too, have been known to page forward through sex scenes, and that it wasn't necessary here is very good to hear.

Also, I am very happy that the ending worked so well for you!

and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out.

Thank you for checking out the story despite your initial "wtf?" reaction! *g* I know Junno/Ryo isn't the first pairing that springs to most people's minds, but... well. Don't they go together amazingly well, when you think about it?

Of course, I'm biased. :-)

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!

This was epic cuteness, WITH porn! Amazing porn!

Yay! :-)) It's great that the story worked so well for you!

And when Junno wants another round. OMG I almost died!

Looks like Ryo has a strenuous life ahead of him... the poor, poor man. *g*

And the parts with the rest of K8 LOOOOOOOVE!!! Subaru FTW!

Go Eito! :-) They are such fun to write, and such fun in general - and if Ryo dares to hope that the teasing and snooping and meddling is mostly over and done with, then, uhm. He'd better think again. *g*

I was so happy to read something of yours again so you can't really blame me for rambling...

Believe me, I'm not blaming you in the least - quite the contrary, thank you for rambling, and feel free to ramble on! :-) It's really wonderful to know that you enjoy my writing so much. Yay!

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!

Ryo really isn't a bastard at all... he's very squishable.
SO TINY, I KNOOW! >3< i mean. :)) junno's squishy, mmph!

Ohkura is a really great friend to have!
~~i want him for my GIRLfriend~~

he's awesome, and fascinating, and multi-faceted and sweet and sharp and dorky and complex and so much more than he may seem at first glance
yes! yes! and a million times, yes! ;_; ♥

I usually find porn one of the most difficult things to get right
it is. so many people tend to make it sound either bland or ridiculous with all their abuse of euphemisms but you did everything just right, it's wonderful. you have every right to be conceited. ;D

I've been addicted to those two for what seems like a long, long time
mine started while watching Ganbatte Ikimasshoi (i might've only enjoyed the drama for nakata and sekino, aa) i think. one of my good friends just looked at me funny for suggesting it so i let it go at that time; kept a tag for the ship on my LJ, though.

But why does it remind you of Junda and/or Ryoda?
ueda = totally obsessed with dolphins. he even wants to be one in his next life or sth, the dork (pun totally intended.) XDDD

Your icon is made of awesome
isn't it? found it on this little site called Noisebot.com. =)) /plug

and THANK YOU for being so fantastic. :Dv

omg, that's so fluffy and funny.I died of laughter when reading this.taguchi is so sweet*pouts*(i wish i had him)
keep writing, you're good.I almost thought taguchi really told those jokes for real.:))
ganbatte!

i've read this a couple of time...so does your other ryonno fics... i loved them all...
i love this too...
slow... for the timing was right...
it made shiver with excitement til the end...

thanks for sharing...

sweetsssssssssss............

So my friend last night told me about a wonderful fic she read. When she told me about the pairing, I was a little hesitant to read it.
But, I'm glad I did.
Your story is completely amazing and fantastic. It's funny, and cute, and sweet, and the sex scene was hot.
I also love your style of writing. You are a very talented writer.

This. I love this. *mem*

How do you always make me smile oh-so mischievously every time I read your fics? ;D I heart eito with their constant bugging and very dirty minds~ Su~ba~ru <3 \XD/ I also love how Ohkura was protective... so squishy^^

RyoXJunno pairing is seriously sinking into me @u@

I'm glad I checked the previous threads in the k8 comm^^
Thank you for this. You are indeed one of the best writers there is.

O_O
OHMYGOD....
I wish i could tell you how much I enjoy your stories, but I have o words.... really....
I Love the way you write, and I think you have an amazing way of having their personalities shine through.... What I like the most is the way you follow Ryo's point of view ( and not just because he is my favorite ^_^)...
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING!
Baci

:-)) I'm very glad! Thanks for letting me know.

Yay! I'm very glad you liked the story. :-)

taguchi is so sweet*pouts*(i wish i had him)

You and me both! Alas, Ryo isn't one for sharing, and gets mean when provoked. Selfish little git... ;-)

I almost thought taguchi really told those jokes for real.:))

:-)) That's great to hear. I'm far from being a natural punster, but Junno's really made me step up my game... plus, I did have some help with some of these. :-)

keep writing, you're good.

Thank you very much - I intend to! :-) And thank you for your lovely feedback!

Yay! I'm very glad you enjoyed this, and that the timing was right. And that you liked my other Junno/Ryo stories too!

it made shiver with excitement til the end...

That's one of the greatest things anyone has ever said about one of my stories. :-) It's really wonderful the story worked so well for you!

sweetsssssssssss............

:-))Thank you very much for letting me know you liked it!

Also: Ryonno sounds interesting! I've actually been wondering what a good pairing acronym for these two would be. Ryonno, hm...

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