A Comedy of Errors
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rheasilviaOr: Nishikido Ryo's Life as a Korean Drama. Featuring an annoying cast of practical jokers, Eito with an unhealthy interest in other people's love lives, and compulsive snugglers.
Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Originally written for the![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
je_fqfest 2009 for diamondsofsix. Slightly less than 8.000 words.
Summary: It's all Pi's fault... Pi and his stupid pranks. Because instead of Ryo's bag and Ryo's bed, Room 8 holds a horde of loud and drunken KinKi Kids and Arashi members, none of whom are in any state to question, although the loudest and most drunken one does try to get Ryo in a headlock and/or offer him some sake.
A Comedy of Errors
Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by:
solo____. Thank you again! Story notes: Originally written for the
je_fqfest 2009 for diamondsofsix. Slightly less than 8.000 words.Summary: It's all Pi's fault... Pi and his stupid pranks. Because instead of Ryo's bag and Ryo's bed, Room 8 holds a horde of loud and drunken KinKi Kids and Arashi members, none of whom are in any state to question, although the loudest and most drunken one does try to get Ryo in a headlock and/or offer him some sake.
A Comedy of Errors
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Date: 2009-08-01 10:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 11:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 11:53 am (UTC)i was imagining Ryo and Taguchi from Ganbatte ikimashoi >< the character they have in this story matches those 2's personalities well ^^
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Date: 2009-08-02 11:44 am (UTC)i was imagining Ryo and Taguchi from Ganbatte ikimashoi >< the character they have in this story matches those 2's personalities well
They definitely did have an interesting dynamic going! I would love to have slash fanfic for Ganbatte.
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Date: 2009-08-01 01:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 11:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 01:32 pm (UTC)The whole thing was gorgeous. Especially loved the ending and this line:
So he's a secret cuddler. So what. Nobody's business, is it?
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Date: 2009-08-02 12:52 pm (UTC)Yay, you liked SecretCuddler!Ryo! *g* I do, too, I confess...
I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :-)
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Date: 2009-08-01 03:05 pm (UTC)"'Kay," Taguchi mumbles, and then bedclothes rustle and the mattress shifts and Taguchi wraps himself around Ryo like an octopus.
Oh this image was so very very sweet *__*
Ryo graciously ignores the cuddling. The man's letting Ryo share his bed, after all. It'd be rude to complain.
I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning XD
When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.
Oh.
Fuck.
Oh, my, god this was hilarious. The sense of impending doom, oh poor poor Ryo!
"Good figure," Subaru goes on. "Long legs. Probably very enthusiastic. Energetic, too. Good to go all night! What do you guys think?"
I laughed out loud at this XD Of course the first thing Subaru would think about is endurance ;D
"Huh," says Taguchi..."You guys really are cool."
You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction XD Somehow he seems like the type of person to take everything in stride, and this situation is no exception ;D
"You want to come inside?" says Junno, at exactly the same moment Ryo blurts out "I should get going."
Oh well. Next time.
This was adorable! I love how you give them all these opportunities and somehow awkwardness gets in the way ♥
"You think I'm some kind of bastard who will kick his heart to the curb and never even notice. I get it, believe me."
Ohkura just holds the stare for another moment, and doesn't apologize.
I loved the whole exchange here, and whre Ohkura is all thoughtful and quiet throughout the entire ordeal because he's friends with Junno *_* I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!
Ryo doesn't think it sounds like a particularly tempting prospect, himself, but Junno lights up like a stage boasting twice the usual number of floodlights.
Oh, Junno's smile can light up the world *___* This was so sweet.
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:27 pm (UTC)Wow, when you set out to do something properly, you don't fool around, do you? Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, and for telling me what bits in particular you enjoyed!
with Ryo basically homeless and needing a room to stay in
Pi has a lot to answer for, that's for sure! *g*
I love all the punning, and Eito's meddling and playful badgering
The Eito tease and meddle and badger because they love. And because it's good for Ryo to be kept on his toes.
Ryo, who rationalizes so much but gets it right somewhere in the middle
He can be a little... set in his ways, shall we say? But he knows a good thing when he sees it. Eventually. ;-)
Junno who is just fabulous and awesome in general.
:-))
I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning
*g* Well, of course! Why else would Ryo endure being cuddled like that? He's just being a good guest.
You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction
Good! :-) And yes, absolutely - to me, Junno also seems like someone who is quite happy to roll with things that would give most other people pause.
I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!
Me too! Ohkura is awesome. And here, it's not that he doesn't like Ryo - he does; he just knows him, and knows Junno, and, well. *g*
I am very glad you liked the story so much! Thank you again for this wonderful note. :-)
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Date: 2009-08-01 04:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 01:30 pm (UTC)je_fqfest was actually the first fic exchange I ever took part in. I'm really glad I did, because it was a lot of fun, and I would probably never have written this story without it! /randomness
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Date: 2009-08-01 04:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 01:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 05:20 pm (UTC)and, and, and. your writing. is so easy to read, not because it's simple, but because it's so fluid and then cuts through just at the right moments, I CAN IMAGINE/FEEL/SAVOUR EVERY BIT and the tone is just appropriate and THE SEX, AS ALWAYS *cue more incoherence*! i've always been intrigued by ryo/junno but you--you've given an addiction. ;A; ♥ ♥ ♥
PS. this is prolly just the junda (and former ryoda) fangirl in me but "dolphin prince" = OH, YOU TWO. XDDDD
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Date: 2009-08-02 03:39 pm (UTC)ryo-- this being in his perspective makes me want to squish him forever, bastard who isn't really much of one after all
No, Ryo really isn't a bastard at all... he's very squishable. He just can't show his soft fluffy core without a lot of kicked-up fuss and diversionary gruffness.
ohkura deserves a special mention because OH BUT HE'S A DOLL all concerned about and protective over junno and ohkura ilyyyy
Ohkura is a really great friend to have! He wants Junno to be happy, so Ryo'd better watch himself. Ryo isn't mean-spirited in the least, but - well, let's just say he's not necessarily the first on the clue bus when it comes to people, most of the time. ;-)
JUNNO. ... I LOVE HIM probably as much as i do the real thing
That's an amazing compliment, and just wonderful to hear!
i guess it's because of YOUR love for the man that he's so entirely lovable in your fics, too
I certainly do think he's awesome, and fascinating, and multi-faceted and sweet and sharp and dorky and complex and so much more than he may seem at first glance - and if that comes through in my stories, then that is... well, awesome. :-)
your writing. is so easy to read, not because it's simple, but because it's so fluid and then cuts through just at the right moments
*blush* You are going to make me conceited!
THE SEX, AS ALWAYS
I usually find porn one of the most difficult things to get right, and am never entirely sure if it works the way I want it to. But judging by your reaction, it does seem to be, so - just, yay!
i've always been intrigued by ryo/junno but you--you've given an addiction.
YES! Then I've definitely been doing something right. *g* I've been addicted to those two for what seems like a long, long time, and it feels much better knowing there are other people out there just as hooked as I am.
PS. this is prolly just the junda (and former ryoda) fangirl in me but "dolphin prince" = OH, YOU TWO.
Yay for the Dolphin Prince! I love that you liked that. :-) But why does it remind you of Junda and/or Ryoda? I think I'm missing something here...
Thank you again for your lovely feedback!
Also: Your icon is made of awesome. :-)
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Date: 2009-08-01 05:25 pm (UTC)it is interesting how one simple thing develops into something more.
I like how their relationship progressed. It felt so natural.
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 08:48 pm (UTC)Oh.
Fuck.
That. is. glorious.
Basically this was amazing...and HOTTTT...
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 08:53 pm (UTC)Was reading this with a friend and several times I had to facepalm because of the puns. f(^_^;;) But they were good. I loved it, if you don't know by now. XD
And--JUNNO PLANNED THIS WHOLE THING, DIDN'T HE.
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Date: 2009-08-02 02:19 pm (UTC)Was reading this with a friend and several times I had to facepalm because of the puns.
Heh. Exactly the effect Junno and I were going for! Puns are best when they make you wince in pain and horror even while you laugh. *g*
JUNNO PLANNED THIS WHOLE THING, DIDN'T HE.
But how could you think such a thing! Really, he is the soul of innocence. And anyway, it's not like Ryo's complaining, is it?
Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-02 12:04 am (UTC)And I loved your fic. And the smut.
*hearts* :)
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 12:25 am (UTC)I love this fic! :DDDDD Please write more forever and ever *_*
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Date: 2009-08-02 02:23 pm (UTC)And I'm really happy about this in particular:
You make RyoxJunno my secret OTP.
YES! Ryo/Junno for the win! :-)
Please write more forever and ever
I'll definitely be writing them for a while longer! :-) I'm very glad you like them - and my stories - so much. Thank you for your lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-02 12:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 01:40 pm (UTC)Junno was so so cute in this fic and Ryo too.
That's why they go so well together... well. Part of the reason. :-)
Unpopular pair, first time to read something about them but I liked it.
That's great to hear! :-) It is an unusual pairing - but I find that once the thought of it takes hold, it's hard to escape. Not that I tried very hard.
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 01:32 pm (UTC)(Also, your icon: cracky cuteness overload! *g*)
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Date: 2009-08-02 04:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 01:42 pm (UTC)Thank you for your feedback - I'm very happy you enjoyed the story!
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Date: 2009-08-02 09:41 am (UTC)A wonderful job, it is! Really.
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Date: 2009-08-02 01:44 pm (UTC)And I find that Junno really grows on you if you give him a chance. Like some kind of very cute, very bendy fungus with a penchant for puns. ;-)
OMG~~~
Date: 2009-08-02 02:06 pm (UTC)I really miss you and your story <333 (so sad I don't have much time to visit lj like before)
*hugs and ♥*
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Date: 2009-08-02 02:26 pm (UTC)Thank you for your lovely feedback - I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :-)
I really miss you and your story
Ack, no time for fandom? That sucks. But drop by whenever you do have the time to visit LJ. I'll be here! :-)
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Date: 2009-08-02 04:40 pm (UTC)I've never watched a Korean dorama before, but I really loved the pace of your fic.
Choice of words was wonderful, same goes for sentence structures.
For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.
AND: I had wet eyes in the last scene (okay, second to last). Wonderful ending there.
Oh: and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out. ^^;;
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Date: 2009-08-04 11:27 pm (UTC)For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.
That's a wonderful compliment! I know the phenomenon you mean... I, too, have been known to page forward through sex scenes, and that it wasn't necessary here is very good to hear.
Also, I am very happy that the ending worked so well for you!
and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out.
Thank you for checking out the story despite your initial "wtf?" reaction! *g* I know Junno/Ryo isn't the first pairing that springs to most people's minds, but... well. Don't they go together amazingly well, when you think about it?
Of course, I'm biased. :-)
Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-02 06:24 pm (UTC)When I first saw this pop up in the K8-forum I wasn't really in the mood to read anything. But then I saw your name and thought "wasn't that the author of 'first contact'?" Which meant that I had to read it. That one was epic porn. This was epic cuteness, WITH porn! Amazing porn!
I wanted to list some favourite things but the list became almost as long as the story itself. XD Like:
Maybe it's Jin, that would be cool –
The bed's occupant rolls over and squints at him vaguely. It's Taguchi.
Hell, whatever. That works too.
or
"Where'd Taguchi find your necklace?" Yoko asks, while Ryo puts it on.
"I guess it must have come off in bed," says Ryo. And no wonder, with all the cuddling Taguchi does.
When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.
Oh.
Fuck.
This is pure win!
"No, wait! I have a plan. You're messing up my plan!"
"Shut up, you idiot," Junno murmurs against his mouth.
And when Junno wants another round. OMG I almost died!
"But when we wake up we..." Junno starts hopefully
And the parts with the rest of K8 LOOOOOOOVE!!! Subaru FTW!
Ok, I'm gonna stop now. But I was so happy to read something of yours again so you can't really blame me for rambling... ^.~
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Date: 2009-08-04 11:37 pm (UTC)Yay! :-)) It's great that the story worked so well for you!
And when Junno wants another round. OMG I almost died!
Looks like Ryo has a strenuous life ahead of him... the poor, poor man. *g*
And the parts with the rest of K8 LOOOOOOOVE!!! Subaru FTW!
Go Eito! :-) They are such fun to write, and such fun in general - and if Ryo dares to hope that the teasing and snooping and meddling is mostly over and done with, then, uhm. He'd better think again. *g*
I was so happy to read something of yours again so you can't really blame me for rambling...
Believe me, I'm not blaming you in the least - quite the contrary, thank you for rambling, and feel free to ramble on! :-) It's really wonderful to know that you enjoy my writing so much. Yay!
Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-09 04:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-08 01:01 am (UTC)keep writing, you're good.I almost thought taguchi really told those jokes for real.:))
ganbatte!
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Date: 2009-08-09 04:11 pm (UTC)taguchi is so sweet*pouts*(i wish i had him)
You and me both! Alas, Ryo isn't one for sharing, and gets mean when provoked. Selfish little git... ;-)
I almost thought taguchi really told those jokes for real.:))
:-)) That's great to hear. I'm far from being a natural punster, but Junno's really made me step up my game... plus, I did have some help with some of these. :-)
keep writing, you're good.
Thank you very much - I intend to! :-) And thank you for your lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-08 08:26 am (UTC)i love this too...
slow... for the timing was right...
it made shiver with excitement til the end...
thanks for sharing...
sweetsssssssssss............
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Date: 2009-08-09 05:38 pm (UTC)it made shiver with excitement til the end...
That's one of the greatest things anyone has ever said about one of my stories. :-) It's really wonderful the story worked so well for you!
sweetsssssssssss............
:-))Thank you very much for letting me know you liked it!
Also: Ryonno sounds interesting! I've actually been wondering what a good pairing acronym for these two would be. Ryonno, hm...
Amazing
Date: 2009-08-08 02:32 pm (UTC)But, I'm glad I did.
Your story is completely amazing and fantastic. It's funny, and cute, and sweet, and the sex scene was hot.
I also love your style of writing. You are a very talented writer.
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Date: 2009-08-09 06:05 pm (UTC)It's funny, and cute, and sweet, and the sex scene was hot.
Yay! Funny and cute and sweet - with a chaser of hot sex - was pretty much exactly what I was going for, so I am very happy that I succeeded for you!
I also love your style of writing.
*blush* I'm really happy to hear it - it's great that you enjoyed the story so much. Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback!
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Date: 2009-08-08 10:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-09 05:42 pm (UTC)