A Comedy of Errors

[rheasilvia]

Or: Nishikido Ryo's Life as a Korean Drama. Featuring an annoying cast of practical jokers, Eito with an unhealthy interest in other people's love lives, and compulsive snugglers.

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by: solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Originally written for the je_fqfest 2009 for diamondsofsix. Slightly less than 8.000 words.

Summary: It's all Pi's fault... Pi and his stupid pranks. Because instead of Ryo's bag and Ryo's bed, Room 8 holds a horde of loud and drunken KinKi Kids and Arashi members, none of whom are in any state to question, although the loudest and most drunken one does try to get Ryo in a headlock and/or offer him some sake.

A Comedy of Errors

Comments

[c0rin.livejournal.com]

This is so very, very, very awesome. I love your writing style. Thank you.

[tellytelly.livejournal.com]

WOW!! i never imagined this pair ..but it's cute!!
i was imagining Ryo and Taguchi from Ganbatte ikimashoi >< the character they have in this story matches those 2's personalities well ^^

[japanimecrazed.livejournal.com]

This is awesome; I love it!

[speckled-writer.livejournal.com]

Oh, I loved this ~

The whole thing was gorgeous. Especially loved the ending and this line:
So he's a secret cuddler. So what. Nobody's business, is it?

[girlearthless.livejournal.com]

Here to leave proper comment! I love love love how you start the story out with Ryo basically homeless and needing a room to stay in xD And of all rooms, Junno's ;D I love all the punning, and Eito's meddling and playful badgering, and Ryo, who rationalizes so much but gets it right somewhere in the middle, and Junno who is just fabulous and awesome in general.

"'Kay," Taguchi mumbles, and then bedclothes rustle and the mattress shifts and Taguchi wraps himself around Ryo like an octopus.
Oh this image was so very very sweet *__*

Ryo graciously ignores the cuddling. The man's letting Ryo share his bed, after all. It'd be rude to complain.
I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning XD

When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.

Oh.

Fuck.
Oh, my, god this was hilarious. The sense of impending doom, oh poor poor Ryo!

"Good figure," Subaru goes on. "Long legs. Probably very enthusiastic. Energetic, too. Good to go all night! What do you guys think?"
I laughed out loud at this XD Of course the first thing Subaru would think about is endurance ;D

"Huh," says Taguchi..."You guys really are cool."
You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction XD Somehow he seems like the type of person to take everything in stride, and this situation is no exception ;D

"You want to come inside?" says Junno, at exactly the same moment Ryo blurts out "I should get going."

Oh well. Next time.
This was adorable! I love how you give them all these opportunities and somehow awkwardness gets in the way ♥

"You think I'm some kind of bastard who will kick his heart to the curb and never even notice. I get it, believe me."

Ohkura just holds the stare for another moment, and doesn't apologize.
I loved the whole exchange here, and whre Ohkura is all thoughtful and quiet throughout the entire ordeal because he's friends with Junno *_* I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!

Ryo doesn't think it sounds like a particularly tempting prospect, himself, but Junno lights up like a stage boasting twice the usual number of floodlights.
Oh, Junno's smile can light up the world *___* This was so sweet.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[silver-rose88.livejournal.com]

ajhgvlkjfadsghfd I absolutely adored this one when it was first posted at je_fqfest, it was one of my favorites. ♥ And re-reading it now just made me love it all the more. Meming this forever now. :D Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful fic! ♥ :))

[kittiec.livejournal.com]

This was so totally awesome. LOVE.

[ravyn-ashling.livejournal.com]

o-o-oh! honey, honey! i didn't think you could make me love anything more than first contact but you just DID, a-a-and dsjkfhs. this. this. it's NOT AU and makes it all the more exciting to imagine and again, the characterisations are SPOT ON: ryo-- this being in his perspective makes me want to squish him forever, bastard who isn't really much of one after all; ohkura deserves a special mention because OH BUT HE'S A DOLL all concerned about and protective over junno and ohkura ilyyyy; and JUNNO. OHMYGOD JUNNO. i think your junno might be my favourite of all junnos in fandom because he's absolutely wonderful so complex completely adorable and I LOVE HIM probably as much as i do the real thing, and i guess it's because of YOUR love for the man that he's so entirely lovable in your fics, too--

and, and, and. your writing. is so easy to read, not because it's simple, but because it's so fluid and then cuts through just at the right moments, I CAN IMAGINE/FEEL/SAVOUR EVERY BIT and the tone is just appropriate and THE SEX, AS ALWAYS *cue more incoherence*! i've always been intrigued by ryo/junno but you--you've given an addiction. ;A; ♥ ♥ ♥

PS. this is prolly just the junda (and former ryoda) fangirl in me but "dolphin prince" = OH, YOU TWO. XDDDD

[snow-meow.livejournal.com]

Unusual pairing but it was a really well written fic.
it is interesting how one simple thing develops into something more.

I like how their relationship progressed. It felt so natural.

[the-trishness.livejournal.com]

When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.

Oh.

Fuck.

That. is. glorious.

Basically this was amazing...and HOTTTT...

[ayumwu.livejournal.com]

ASDKFJ;ALSKDJF I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. *________* Not too much on the porn, TBH, because nothing can beat your Ryo/Junno BDSM, really, but the fluff! And the plotting! And the puns! Oh the puns!

Was reading this with a friend and several times I had to facepalm because of the puns. f(^_^;;) But they were good. I loved it, if you don't know by now. XD

And--JUNNO PLANNED THIS WHOLE THING, DIDN'T HE.

[jtriskell.livejournal.com]

Made my day. I love your Junno so much.
And I loved your fic. And the smut.
*hearts* :)

[pixisticks.livejournal.com]

I was so excited when I saw you'd written another fic! You make RyoxJunno my secret OTP. :x You write them so well. alskfhsalfkhalf. I love your fics. And I was cracking up through this one--the part with Ryo when it all begins and Eito's interrogations and alskhflafh it was just so hilarious. xD And Junno's horrible puns, ahahaha. And then there was hot sex and. Yes. *_____________________________________*

I love this fic! :DDDDD Please write more forever and ever *_*

[shiroiamy.livejournal.com]

Oooh, that was so fantastic! Thank you for writeing this. :D Junno was so so cute in this fic and Ryo too. Unpopular pair, first time to read something about them but I liked it.^^ *hugs*

[fionnakreuz.livejournal.com]

Okay, I ship. ♥

[bitofajungle.livejournal.com]

that was... the hottest thing I've ever read. And so rediculously cute at the same time. But hot. I thought I was going to faint or something. omg. love. <3

[agemaki.livejournal.com]

what can I say? I'm stunned. Who would have thought a story about Junnosuke could be so entertaining, well written, witty and lovely? Wooo. You never end learning.
A wonderful job, it is! Really.

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm very glad you liked it. :-) Thank *you* for letting me know you enjoyed the story!

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

:-)) I'm very glad! Thank you for letting me know.

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

It's not the first pairing that comes to most people's minds - but I'm very glad you gave it a chance even so! And that you enjoyed the story. :-)

i was imagining Ryo and Taguchi from Ganbatte ikimashoi >< the character they have in this story matches those 2's personalities well

They definitely did have an interesting dynamic going! I would love to have slash fanfic for Ganbatte.

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Especially loved the ending and this line

Yay, you liked SecretCuddler!Ryo! *g* I do, too, I confess...

I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :-)

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Here to leave proper comment!

Wow, when you set out to do something properly, you don't fool around, do you? Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, and for telling me what bits in particular you enjoyed!

with Ryo basically homeless and needing a room to stay in

Pi has a lot to answer for, that's for sure! *g*

I love all the punning, and Eito's meddling and playful badgering

The Eito tease and meddle and badger because they love. And because it's good for Ryo to be kept on his toes.

Ryo, who rationalizes so much but gets it right somewhere in the middle

He can be a little... set in his ways, shall we say? But he knows a good thing when he sees it. Eventually. ;-)

Junno who is just fabulous and awesome in general.

:-))

I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning

*g* Well, of course! Why else would Ryo endure being cuddled like that? He's just being a good guest.

You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction

Good! :-) And yes, absolutely - to me, Junno also seems like someone who is quite happy to roll with things that would give most other people pause.

I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!

Me too! Ohkura is awesome. And here, it's not that he doesn't like Ryo - he does; he just knows him, and knows Junno, and, well. *g*

I am very glad you liked the story so much! Thank you again for this wonderful note. :-)

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

I'm very glad you enjoy the story so much! Thank you for letting me know, and for meming. :-)

je_fqfest was actually the first fic exchange I ever took part in. I'm really glad I did, because it was a lot of fun, and I would probably never have written this story without it! /randomness

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

I'm very glad you liked the story - thank you for letting me know! :-)

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

YES! Then my work here is done! :-))

(Also, your icon: cracky cuteness overload! *g*)