Mutants begin. At some point. /lame Batman reference

[rheasilvia]

Is anyone around who'd be willing to give me an opinion on the beginning of a very short (around 1000 words) and slightly cracky XMFC story...?

I can't decide whether or not to cut the first three paragraphs. I could really use a second opinion!

On the title too, actually. But then that's normal for me. Title-impaired should have been my middle name.

Comments

[a_q]

I can read & comment if you like?
messageforh@gmail.com is my email

[rheasilvia]

Thank you very much! I've resolved the issue of the beginning now, though, and am just about to post... I should have deleted this entry, really.

It's really nice of you to offer, though - I do appreciate it! *hugs*

[a_q]

Glad to hear you worked it out! :)