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JE Fanfic: First Contact

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit m/m sex. Also, bondage.
Story notes: AU, slightly more than 31,000 words. Various other JE characters – as well as two non-JE ones – appear in supporting roles.
Betaed by:

diamondsofsix,

k_julia and

solo____ – all of whom helped immeasurably. Thank you very much! This story would be very different – and much worse – without you.

solo____ deserves special thanks for going above and beyond.

Summary:
Detectives Nishikido Ryo and Taguchi Junnosuke go undercover in a gay BDSM club run by the mob. Ryo is not happy about this, though not for the reasons you might expect.

First Contact

As always, feedback of all kinds – positive and negative – is very much appreciated!

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Oh my God. I couldn't quite believe myself, that I was clicking on a Ryo/Junno fic, but I am so glad I did because this is fucking golden. That was the best characterization of Junno I have ever read -- nuanced and poignant, with that ever-effacing cheerful, but that harsh side... absolutely beautiful. Your Ryo was excellent, too -- brash and cocky and arrogant, but with just enough self-doubt to make him likeable.

I don't know how much research you did for this fic, but it felt extremely well crafted, the whole seedy Yakuza underworld you created. The hints you kept dropping left me wanting more and more, although this story stands beautifully by itself.

There aren't enough fics like this in JE fandom. Thank you for writing a true gem.

... I think I love you. Really. You had me at Ryo/Junno and dear god it just got so much better from there. I don't even know what to SAY!

Ryo being stupid and Junno being fucking hot like we all know he is but still his same sweet dorky self.

Junno being equally stupid by cutting out on Ryo in the morning and omg the SEX and the fact that you could pretty much FEEL Ryo's confusion and want and need was just fantastic!

This was amazing and I am SO glad you wrote it. ♥

a;sldkfj I had to...well, okay, I didn't read it twice (not yet!) or I really wouldn't be able to make a coherent comment. *_________*

I love this like I love Ohkura (and I think that says something because I seriously love that man, a lot.) and some more, because there's OHKURA *in* it, and it had me cracking up of all sorts because -- yeah. I don't know what's funny, but I laugh at odd things according to others and well, in this case it's not a bad thing because yeah, the sex was great. (I hope it still sounds unawkward at this point, haha)

Just...the BDSM was great and yeah, I'll be re-reading it now...*shuffles off*

Oh and I memmed it. Lol.

I totally loved your fic <3
like in.. TOTALLY!
XD
Though it is AU, you managed to write both Junno and Ryo so in-chara, it's awesome.
Special thanks for the puns (why so few?;_;) and.. well, just for writing and posting the whole fic <3

[I just needed to look where I knew your writing from - the Taguchi-falling-in-Love-fic, ne? Maaa, I'm slow tonight, but I can say it's because of your fic - and the time (half past 3)]

Linked here by a friend.

I. Idek what to say to this but I wanted to leave some kind of comment because this fic, omg, this fic.

The last time I read an undercover-BDSM-type fic was years and years ago in a different fandom, and this beats that about 150x over, hands down. It's Ryo and Junno. What the hell. I am not even a big fan of Junno. Or, at least, I wasn't. Hel~lo, newfound Junno-love. *_*

The friend who linked this fic to me, she and I, we. We. Capslocked and flailed as we read the fic at the same time despite being continents and oceans apart (fanfic: bridging the transcontinental gap). And were generally "Jesus CHRIST." and "cantbreathe" and so on at each other.

I am up too late and am too braindead to leave a better comment. But this. You. Yes. ♥xinfinity^forever

i... i don't know what to say. it's such a douchey thing on my part because as a writer i love when people quote stuff and tell me which parts made them ~feel~ but that's pretty much impossible here because EVERY SINGLE FUCKING WORD. i must have been flailing to four different people in im and i blew off making dinner and breathing during certain parts and just. ryo's narrative. i want to say it's like what twilight was supposed to be, all real-time and choppy.

AND NAKAMARU WAS AWESOME. *_* HE HAD A CAT. :D

please never stop writing.

This is just... amazing. *___* I absolutely love love love the way you wrote Ryo and Junno and the dynamic you built up between them. I loved the background that went into the story and the way you built them both up as believable characters, and the fact that it is a cop AU. A believable cop AU. There are not enough of these in the world!

I just... really do not know what else to say. I would flail around like I did to a friend on IM when I was reading it, but it wouldn't amount to much more than starry eyes and lots of babbling and capslocking. XD;

Suffice it to say: YOU. ARE. AWESOME.

(Also, I don't think I ever commented because I suck at such things, but I read The Taguchi Method of Falling In Love awhile back and it's one of my all time favorite fics ever. Your writing is amazing. Please keep writing forever and ever. ♥)

I was really wary of clicking on this for a lot of reasons, so it was a surprise that I really liked it. My bias is such that I would have appreciated more on the Uchi front, but I did like what you did there, translating what happened into the AU context.

While I don't read KAT-TUN fic pretty much ever, I like how you write Junno, and I also liked your Ryo characterization (which, believe me, is saying a lot XD). And mostly I'm just really happy to see long fic with an actual plot that still manages good characterization. And some very nice porn.

(Just one little note: Tsubasa's last name is Imai, so if they're all going by given names, he should be Tsubasa.)

YOU.

YOU.

YOU.

HOW MUCH CAN I PAY YOU TO WRITE FIC LIKE THIS FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER.

alksfaklfhalfkhakflshfk oh my god. I. The pairing and the premise was so weird that I couldn't help but click, and I admit I expected it to be completely horrible and stupid and ridiculously OOC, but I was so, so, so wrong. This is like the Susan Boyle of fic. XD This is so incredible. The writing and the characterization and just. God. EVERYTHING. It was amazing. WHY CAN'T WE HAVE MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN THIS FANDOM.

I loved Ryo's inner narrative so, so much. And his process from hating Junno's presence and feeling like he's been intruded upon, to being possessive and getting feelings for him felt so NATURAL, especially since you didn't go from total loathing to 'I-can't-live-without-you-we-are-kizuna~~~~~~~~~*~*~*' love in the blink of an eye. It was so... just. AUGH. GOOD. I don't know. I loved it.

Even the BDSM was perfect. I'm not big on heavy bondage and stuff like that, but I felt like it was just the right mixture of hardcore and not over the top. It was SO hot and I yelled numerous times when you stopped. XDDD I complained about you being a cocktease because lakshflaf that's just how caught up in it I was. GAH. I loved it. Jin is my favourite JE boy ever and I rarely read fic without him in it (and LIKE it), which just shows you how much I love this.

WRITE MORE. WE NEED MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN JE FANDOM.

*worships*

Oh god. This was fucking gorgeous and absolutely brilliant. I wish I could give you a more coherent and articulate comment saying all the awesome things you did with this fic, but, really, I would end up quoting your entire story. And that's the thing, you had a great plotline, undercover cops at a gay bdsm club, it really does not get better than that (and I usually don't read bdsm, but my god you made it hot) and characters that actually feel like real people because you are so great at writing out their thought processes.

I loved how you wrote Junno and Ryo. Junno because he isn't all sunshine and smiles and terrible jokes, because he is more than that and I appreciated how you incorporated that. Especially when you wrote about how he was when he was talking about his dead partner, my heart just kind of broke because that side of Junno I love. And Ryo, my god your Ryo. His voice was so him throughout the entire fic. I also loved how you included Shingo and Ohkura, you really made me see them and it was hot.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it was wonderfully written and executed, and I'll probably need to read this again just so I can appreciate everything.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE x infinity!!!!

This is just too beautiful that I don't even know what to say. I really hesitated to click the link at first since the pairing seemed pretty unusual to me but I sure am glad I did! You had me reading on and on non-stop~

I love how the characters show themselves. They really speak out. I can't thank you enough for sharing this wonderful fic and I'll surely keep track of your creations time on.

More power to you <3

@.@

I.

Um.

DDDD: No words. Seriously, no words alknlknsdh. [has been slain]

GA

YOU ARE MY MOST FAVOURITE PERSON EVER. This story is SUBLIME.
God, every single word is incredible. I would quote bits at you but I think I would exceed the comment limits.

BEYOND WORDS. Words like AWESOME and WONDERFUL and BEAUTIFUL and skdjfwlv. I have been reduced to incoherent flailing and literally mkaing hearts at the screen. ♥ ♥ ♥

tat was so fahsbliunar;giubnawfugbvaldfhbnasfldkobnfj;b i went into this blind, not realising its length and OMG WAT A FANTASTICALLY BRILLIANT WAY to have spent 2 hours of my life.

i noe ryo and junno have their connection-point from a drama they did way back, but apart from tat, they appear to move in their own spheres, but u so totally make them work. ur junno, like in ur previous story, is beautiful, gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous, and very much in character - ppl love to focus on his dajare-appearance, but he is, which u have shown so well, so much more dimensionally complex than tat. in fact, ur junno is one of the best i've ever read, and this story has entirely blown my mind to bits!

This is like the Susan Boyle of fic.

*snorts* ilu ♥

Oh dear lord.

I need a cold shower (for good reason). This. There is not enough BSDM in JE and this. alksdj Junno playing sub and being so good at hit asfklajhs dhalskjdh hnarghhhhh. And there is Ohkura and Shingo and alskjd as your Ryo said in the fic, oh gods.

This was amazing. It's nothing like what I usually read, but it was fascinating and hot and ended on such a sweet note.

OH YOU. ♥ SDKJHSFGKFGJKHGDFJHKDFGJHKDFGJHK

gosh, this is amusing, and ryo's inner monologue is absolutely fantastic. you've outdone yourself this time bb. *FLAILFLAILFLAIL* and now I have this image in my head of junno actually walking around going 'bla bla bla' XDD

also, one of my friends started flailing about this fic on messenger. XDD FEEL LOVED, HONEY.

*cheers*
I've read this kind of super hot brilliant bdsm smut fic in a couple of fandoms, but have never had the chance to read it in JE so far.
Thank you. The detail was astounding, the sex absolutely bafflingly marvellous and I *heart* your Junno so much. He's got character and he's hot and assertive when he wants to be and darn he's incredible. And thanks so much for the Nakamaru cameo. And Ohkura. Ohkura was *HOT* I hope to read more JE smut fic from you, because you do a fabulous job.
Thanks so much for sharing. I loved it.
(and you're getting my food!kink icon because my KAT-TUN icons just aren't smutty enough for your fic ;D)

DFSÖLJDGLKÖJDFHJKSDFÖKLJDFHJKLDGHJK

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Two people on my f-list recced this, and if they hadn't I never would have clicked on such a rare pairing. Anyone else who scrolls past it is really missing out.

This layout makes it really difficult to quote, but if I could this comment would be six inches long.

What I love in any piece of writing is when a writer gives me a realistic character with certain, defined personality traits - making it clear what this character would and wouldn't do - and then creates a story that changes that person, making it utterly believable that those traits have changed.

This part here:
Falling into the role is always an inner shift of some kind, but the exact nature of the shift changes, depending on the undercover assignment. This time… this time, it's something completely new. Because most of all, walking through the Ragaraja's door – duffel bag of fetish gear in hand – is a relief.

It's like inner bonds loosening and falling away. Ryo wants to touch Junno, and so he does – he puts his free hand to the small of Junno's back, flat against cotton and warm skin, just like that. When he slides his hand down into Junno's back pocket, Junno leans into the touch.

We see how Ryo has changed and we are happy for him. Relieved for him. I can imagine him walking through those doors into a place that should be repulsive and nerve-wracking and dangerous to him and yet knowing that it's the only place where he can truly have what he wants and needs at that moment.

I don't usually read kink fics, either, and I was impressed at the knowledge/research that you shared. I don't know anything about this stuff, but you presented it in a way that made it easy to visualize and yet not distasteful for those of us who don't swing that way. It was fun to read.

The parts that were humorous played well against the parts that were suspenseful. Usually I can't read a fic this long without my mind wandering and leaving and coming back to it, but I read this one straight though. Fantastic story telling.

Personally, I can't stand Taguchi. I hate his stupid smile and stupid jokes and I ignore anything with him in it. But ... damn you make him hot and beautiful.

I hate writing smut because I feel like I'm using the same words and phrases over and over, telling something that has been told so many times that the shine has worn thin. But your writing isn't like that at all - it's fluid and graceful and beautiful and I'm so happy that people recced this because otherwise I would have missed it.

Thank you for sharing it.

I LOVE JUNRYO~~~
Kyaaa!!! 8>v<8

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