rheasilvia: (Junno sexy)
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Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit m/m sex. Also, bondage.
Story notes: AU, slightly more than 31,000 words. Various other JE characters – as well as two non-JE ones – appear in supporting roles.
Betaed by: [livejournal.com profile] diamondsofsix, [livejournal.com profile] k_julia and [livejournal.com profile] solo____ – all of whom helped immeasurably. Thank you very much! This story would be very different – and much worse – without you. [livejournal.com profile] solo____ deserves special thanks for going above and beyond.

Summary:
Detectives Nishikido Ryo and Taguchi Junnosuke go undercover in a gay BDSM club run by the mob. Ryo is not happy about this, though not for the reasons you might expect.


First Contact


As always, feedback of all kinds – positive and negative – is very much appreciated!

Date: 2009-06-01 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
YOU.

YOU.




YOU.

HOW MUCH CAN I PAY YOU TO WRITE FIC LIKE THIS FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER.

alksfaklfhalfkhakflshfk oh my god. I. The pairing and the premise was so weird that I couldn't help but click, and I admit I expected it to be completely horrible and stupid and ridiculously OOC, but I was so, so, so wrong. This is like the Susan Boyle of fic. XD This is so incredible. The writing and the characterization and just. God. EVERYTHING. It was amazing. WHY CAN'T WE HAVE MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN THIS FANDOM.

I loved Ryo's inner narrative so, so much. And his process from hating Junno's presence and feeling like he's been intruded upon, to being possessive and getting feelings for him felt so NATURAL, especially since you didn't go from total loathing to 'I-can't-live-without-you-we-are-kizuna~~~~~~~~~*~*~*' love in the blink of an eye. It was so... just. AUGH. GOOD. I don't know. I loved it.

Even the BDSM was perfect. I'm not big on heavy bondage and stuff like that, but I felt like it was just the right mixture of hardcore and not over the top. It was SO hot and I yelled numerous times when you stopped. XDDD I complained about you being a cocktease because lakshflaf that's just how caught up in it I was. GAH. I loved it. Jin is my favourite JE boy ever and I rarely read fic without him in it (and LIKE it), which just shows you how much I love this.

WRITE MORE. WE NEED MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN JE FANDOM.

*worships*

Date: 2009-06-01 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pipsqueaks.livejournal.com
This is like the Susan Boyle of fic.

*snorts* ilu ♥

Date: 2009-06-01 10:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
This is like the Susan Boyle of fic.

LOL! Thank you, that's a weird and wonderful compliment. :-)

I know that Junno/Ryo is not a pairing most people will immediately like the thought of... and the premise may have fanfic tradition, but, yes, does have potentially problematic aspects. *g* So I am very glad that you gave the story a chance despite all of that - and that you then enjoyed it so much!

I loved Ryo's inner narrative so, so much. And his process from hating Junno's presence and feeling like he's been intruded upon, to being possessive and getting feelings for him felt so NATURAL

This makes me very happy! Ryo's voice and his (and the reader's) view of Junno, both of their characterization and their relationship and how it changes and grows - that was just what was most important to me to get right, and I am so glad that you liked how it turned out. :-)

Even the BDSM was perfect

Yay! I am so very happy to hear that this was hot. *g* I am always a little uncertain whether the sex scenes will work the way I want them to, so it's great to know that they did work for you!!

Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback! And I definitely hope to write more in this fandom - if only because there is so very little Ryo/Junno, and I have managed to fall hopelessly in love with the pairing. *g*

Date: 2009-06-02 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
How much can I pay you to write Pin. >.>

*shot a million times, skitters off*

Date: 2009-06-02 09:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
*g* Hey, for the right price I'll write about a lot of things...

Though fairness compels me to add that I doubt you'd be happy with the result in this case. :-)

Date: 2009-06-03 06:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
It's not even that... I honestly have nothing against the pairing at all; I can imagine they might theoretically go quite well together.

I just can't muster up much interest in any pairing that doesn't include Junno, so the result of me attempting to write anything for such a pairing would be pretty lackluster. :-)

Date: 2009-06-03 06:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
You may promise to pay her, but I know where she lives. There was that thing with a horse's head, wasn't there... oh wait, wrong universe.

Still. :-)

Date: 2009-06-03 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
This may be the start of a beautiful enablership.

Wait! No! Argh! :-)

Date: 2009-06-03 03:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
I failed to make myself clear. :-)

The horse head will happen should she feel tempted to accept your offer! No Pin here. Pin-free zone. I need an icon.

...mutter mutter gotta work on my threats mutter mutter...

You purposely misled me! *woe*

Date: 2009-06-03 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
D: So I am not welcome on these grounds?

Not on purpose. Really truly. :-(

Date: 2009-06-03 04:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
Hey, nobody is 'not welcome' just because of the pairing they like! :-) This isn't my journal anyway I'm just hijacking the thread for confusing hypothetical second-hand threats against the owner - but you'd be very welcome there, too! Only the Akame bias might make you run away. Or go 'grrrrr' a lot. ^_^

*sniff* Promise?

Date: 2009-06-03 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
Oh, Akame! That's okay too. XD I like anything with Jin in it Akame too! It's just that good Akame fic is so rare these days that I was beginning to lose hope that there were other intelligent Akame fans I didn't already know. :(

Totally!

Date: 2009-06-03 04:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
Using the word 'intelligent' after my threat fiasco is very generous of you! :-)

I agree it's quite rare. But a friend who will occasionally venture into the dark side Pin territory (see! I said friend! Some of my best friends are-- oops.), was just recently complaining that there isn't much decent fic there, either. I don't know what it's like there, but with Akame, I have found that simply unsubscribing from [livejournal.com profile] akame_ gave me a different perspective. Good fic still comes along infrequently, but at least I no longer see all the 'hai gais i wrote this in half an hour in art class and i know it sux, no beta coz i coudnt wait, i heart feedback and no flames and oh kame is a girl in this fic hehe dun hate me now' contributions.

Akame has some excellent writers, and I bet Pin has, too. They're just too busy with RL things to produce a lot. What we need... what we need is a rich sponsor to fund a writing contest between the two groups, something where everybody gets paid a lot of money to go hang out in a nice onsen and do nothing but write good fic. I'm sure a Junno/Ryo writer could also be invited along, in acknowledgement of where the project was first mooted.

Looks around... hm, now who's rich?
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
Akame has some excellent writers, and I bet Pin has, too. They're just too busy with RL things to produce a lot. What we need... what we need is a rich sponsor to fund a writing contest between the two groups

Ahem. I beg your pardon? Akame and Pin *have* some excellent writers, so they should count their blessings. Any financial support should go to the truly needy pairings.

Some people around here are too spoiled, methinks. *grumph*

blabla bla.... bla blabla

Date: 2009-06-03 06:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
Aw, Ryo-chan is upset...

I think nothing can beat the Kung Fu Kitchen Fuck, actually. :-)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
Aw, Ryo-chan is upset...

That's right, and you don't want to make him angy, do you? Well, do you??

(The Kung Fu Kitchen Fuck is awesome. I would order it in a second. I still want the fanfic. I would PAY for that fanfic.* *g*)

* Legal note: Any horrible pairing ideas will be met with prompt and merciless retaliation.
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
and you don't want to make him angy, do you

Or even angry. I have it on K8's authority that if you make him angry, you can shut the show down. :-)

Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 06:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
Not a bad idea, that, with the horse head. Might also be applicable to people who do horrible things with Ryo...

Or I could threaten with dire Pin retaliation. ;-)

Re: Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 06:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
Not a bad idea, that, with the horse head. Might also be applicable to people who do horrible things with Ryo...

Yes, it might! But clearly you are not referring to anyone we know, or are you?

Re: Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 06:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
So you keep the spare key under the flower pot, do you?

Re: Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 07:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/solo____/
Hey! [livejournal.com profile] k_julia and I just gave him a night of passion with Junno! (Okay, so it was behind the scenes. Still.) What is your complaint?

Don't give me that innocent look, missy...

Date: 2009-06-03 08:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
...I see that plot you're hiding behind your back.

*sniff*

Re: Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] k-julia.livejournal.com
Hey! What have we ever done to Ryo? Getting scared of dead horses now. How will I explain them to my mother?

Re: Actually...

Date: 2009-06-03 08:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rheasilvia.livejournal.com
Don't think you can mollify me with cute Ryo icons, you. *sniff*

What have we ever done to Ryo?

You two are so pure and innocent all of a sudden, now that possible horse heads have entered stage left! I will have to keep that in mind.

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