JE Fanfic: First Contact
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Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit m/m sex. Also, bondage.
Story notes: AU, slightly more than 31,000 words. Various other JE characters – as well as two non-JE ones – appear in supporting roles.
Betaed by:
diamondsofsix,
k_julia and
solo____ – all of whom helped immeasurably. Thank you very much! This story would be very different – and much worse – without you.
solo____ deserves special thanks for going above and beyond.
Summary:
Detectives Nishikido Ryo and Taguchi Junnosuke go undercover in a gay BDSM club run by the mob. Ryo is not happy about this, though not for the reasons you might expect.
First Contact
As always, feedback of all kinds – positive and negative – is very much appreciated!
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit m/m sex. Also, bondage.
Story notes: AU, slightly more than 31,000 words. Various other JE characters – as well as two non-JE ones – appear in supporting roles.
Betaed by:
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Summary:
Detectives Nishikido Ryo and Taguchi Junnosuke go undercover in a gay BDSM club run by the mob. Ryo is not happy about this, though not for the reasons you might expect.
First Contact
As always, feedback of all kinds – positive and negative – is very much appreciated!
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Date: 2009-06-01 02:53 am (UTC)YOU.
YOU.
HOW MUCH CAN I PAY YOU TO WRITE FIC LIKE THIS FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER.
alksfaklfhalfkhakflshfk oh my god. I. The pairing and the premise was so weird that I couldn't help but click, and I admit I expected it to be completely horrible and stupid and ridiculously OOC, but I was so, so, so wrong. This is like the Susan Boyle of fic. XD This is so incredible. The writing and the characterization and just. God. EVERYTHING. It was amazing. WHY CAN'T WE HAVE MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN THIS FANDOM.
I loved Ryo's inner narrative so, so much. And his process from hating Junno's presence and feeling like he's been intruded upon, to being possessive and getting feelings for him felt so NATURAL, especially since you didn't go from total loathing to 'I-can't-live-without-you-we-are-kizuna~~~~~~~~~*~*~*' love in the blink of an eye. It was so... just. AUGH. GOOD. I don't know. I loved it.
Even the BDSM was perfect. I'm not big on heavy bondage and stuff like that, but I felt like it was just the right mixture of hardcore and not over the top. It was SO hot and I yelled numerous times when you stopped. XDDD I complained about you being a cocktease because lakshflaf that's just how caught up in it I was. GAH. I loved it. Jin is my favourite JE boy ever and I rarely read fic without him in it (and LIKE it), which just shows you how much I love this.
WRITE MORE. WE NEED MORE FIC LIKE THIS IN JE FANDOM.
*worships*
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Date: 2009-06-01 10:44 am (UTC)*snorts* ilu ♥
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Date: 2009-06-01 10:55 pm (UTC)LOL! Thank you, that's a weird and wonderful compliment. :-)
I know that Junno/Ryo is not a pairing most people will immediately like the thought of... and the premise may have fanfic tradition, but, yes, does have potentially problematic aspects. *g* So I am very glad that you gave the story a chance despite all of that - and that you then enjoyed it so much!
I loved Ryo's inner narrative so, so much. And his process from hating Junno's presence and feeling like he's been intruded upon, to being possessive and getting feelings for him felt so NATURAL
This makes me very happy! Ryo's voice and his (and the reader's) view of Junno, both of their characterization and their relationship and how it changes and grows - that was just what was most important to me to get right, and I am so glad that you liked how it turned out. :-)
Even the BDSM was perfect
Yay! I am so very happy to hear that this was hot. *g* I am always a little uncertain whether the sex scenes will work the way I want them to, so it's great to know that they did work for you!!
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback! And I definitely hope to write more in this fandom - if only because there is so very little Ryo/Junno, and I have managed to fall hopelessly in love with the pairing. *g*
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Date: 2009-06-02 01:20 am (UTC)*shot a million times, skitters off*
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Date: 2009-06-02 09:38 pm (UTC)Though fairness compels me to add that I doubt you'd be happy with the result in this case. :-)
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Date: 2009-06-03 03:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-03 06:10 pm (UTC)I just can't muster up much interest in any pairing that doesn't include Junno, so the result of me attempting to write anything for such a pairing would be pretty lackluster. :-)
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Date: 2009-06-03 06:42 am (UTC)Still. :-)
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Date: 2009-06-03 03:17 pm (UTC)Wait! No! Argh! :-)
Date: 2009-06-03 03:50 pm (UTC)The horse head will happen should she feel tempted to accept your offer! No Pin here. Pin-free zone. I need an icon.
...mutter mutter gotta work on my threats mutter mutter...
You purposely misled me! *woe*
Date: 2009-06-03 03:51 pm (UTC)Not on purpose. Really truly. :-(
Date: 2009-06-03 04:00 pm (UTC)*sniff* Promise?
Date: 2009-06-03 04:08 pm (UTC)anything with Jin in itAkame too! It's just that good Akame fic is so rare these days that I was beginning to lose hope that there were other intelligent Akame fans I didn't already know. :(Totally!
Date: 2009-06-03 04:33 pm (UTC)I agree it's quite rare. But a friend who will occasionally venture into
the dark sidePin territory (see! I said friend! Some of my best friends are-- oops.), was just recently complaining that there isn't much decent fic there, either. I don't know what it's like there, but with Akame, I have found that simply unsubscribing fromAkame has some excellent writers, and I bet Pin has, too. They're just too busy with RL things to produce a lot. What we need... what we need is a rich sponsor to fund a writing contest between the two groups, something where everybody gets paid a lot of money to go hang out in a nice onsen and do nothing but write good fic. I'm sure a Junno/Ryo writer could also be invited along, in acknowledgement of where the project was first mooted.
Looks around... hm, now who's rich?
It occurs to me that I need a "pissy Ryo" icon...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:07 pm (UTC)Ahem. I beg your pardon? Akame and Pin *have* some excellent writers, so they should count their blessings. Any financial support should go to the truly needy pairings.
Some people around here are too spoiled, methinks. *grumph*
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Date: 2009-06-03 06:22 pm (UTC)I think nothing can beat the Kung Fu Kitchen Fuck, actually. :-)
Let's see who's laughing when he sics Subaru on you...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:29 pm (UTC)That's right, and you don't want to make him angy, do you? Well, do you??
(The Kung Fu Kitchen Fuck is awesome. I would order it in a second. I still want the fanfic. I would PAY for that fanfic.* *g*)
* Legal note: Any horrible pairing ideas will be met with prompt and merciless retaliation.
Re: Let's see who's laughing when he sics Subaru on you...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:31 pm (UTC)Or even angry. I have it on K8's authority that if you make him angry, you can shut the show down. :-)
I thought Shingo was the one with the knife
From:Don't think I don't see that pun. ;-)
From:Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:12 pm (UTC)Or I could threaten with dire Pin retaliation. ;-)
Re: Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:21 pm (UTC)Yes, it might! But clearly you are not referring to anyone we know, or are you?
Re: Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 06:25 pm (UTC)Re: Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 07:34 pm (UTC)Don't give me that innocent look, missy...
Date: 2009-06-03 08:16 pm (UTC)*sniff*
Re: Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 07:36 pm (UTC)Re: Actually...
Date: 2009-06-03 08:25 pm (UTC)What have we ever done to Ryo?
You two are so pure and innocent all of a sudden, now that possible horse heads have entered stage left! I will have to keep that in mind.