Expert development of the story and subtle hinting at what really happened, just teasing us with the details and making us figure it out ourselves.
Ooh, it's wonderful that worked so well for you - because while that was exactly what I was trying to do, I really couldn't tell if it was going to work for readers. I am extremely glad it did work for you! Thanks for letting me know you liked the story!
And yes, Poor Sammy, and poor Dean... the car probably got the best deal here.
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Date: 2006-05-14 10:01 pm (UTC)Ooh, it's wonderful that worked so well for you - because while that was exactly what I was trying to do, I really couldn't tell if it was going to work for readers. I am extremely glad it did work for you! Thanks for letting me know you liked the story!
And yes, Poor Sammy, and poor Dean... the car probably got the best deal here.