I'm very glad indeed to hear that you liked it! It sounds as though the story worked for you exactly as I'd hoped it would. :-) I found it rather tricky to judge where the fine line between obscurity and heavy-handedness was, and I'm really relieved that I seem to have found it. :-)
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story!
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Date: 2006-05-15 03:20 pm (UTC)Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story!