Oh, I find it hard to express my love for this story. The quiet sadness insinuating itself subtly, so that I barely knew what was happening. Until the wrecking of the car.
That was masterfully done. All about show, not tell. Fantastic work. I'm friending you, and hoping to catch more of your fic.
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Date: 2006-05-17 11:33 pm (UTC)That was masterfully done. All about show, not tell. Fantastic work. I'm friending you, and hoping to catch more of your fic.