*blush* Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! :-)
I loved how you wrote Junno and Ryo.
That's great to hear, because it was one of the most important things I wanted to get right! Characterization is always a very major thing for me, but especially in an AU story, it has to be just right - so the characters are believably and wholly themselves, while at the same time being different from their canon selves the way they would be under the given AU circumstances. (Exploring this is, in fact, why I love AUs in the first place. *g*)
And yes, Junno is far more than he may seem at first glance (and not just in this story). I'm very happy you felt for him, and that you liked Ryo's voice too, and that Shingo and Ohkura worked, and that it was all hot! :-))) (I'm always a bit insecure about the hotness, so, yes. *g*)
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Date: 2009-06-01 11:05 pm (UTC)I loved how you wrote Junno and Ryo.
That's great to hear, because it was one of the most important things I wanted to get right! Characterization is always a very major thing for me, but especially in an AU story, it has to be just right - so the characters are believably and wholly themselves, while at the same time being different from their canon selves the way they would be under the given AU circumstances. (Exploring this is, in fact, why I love AUs in the first place. *g*)
And yes, Junno is far more than he may seem at first glance (and not just in this story). I'm very happy you felt for him, and that you liked Ryo's voice too, and that Shingo and Ohkura worked, and that it was all hot! :-))) (I'm always a bit insecure about the hotness, so, yes. *g*)
(Love your icon, btw!)