Laugh-"He can so swing it. Fuck them." and "Move over, butch. No hogging the mirror."
Cry-"Ryo looks down to find Uchi watching him with a very familiar, mocking curl of the lip. His eyes are glazed and he looks more than half-dead, but that look... Ryo's caught that look more times than he can count.
For one moment, everything rights itself in Ryo's world and he can see the old Uchi in his head, smirking at him. *You want to hit that pretty bad, huh? Yeah you do, don't give me the innocent look, you little fruit. He even swing your way? Guess you'll find out! Ten thou say you can't keep it in your pants for longer than a week.*"
Kick-""Interesting," says the man standing a couple of lockers down. He's wearing a sober, dark grey business suit and is very tall, and Ryo doesn't have time to notice much more than that before he goes on. "You really think it's a good idea to seduce your sub? You shouldn't pamper him. He's far too spoiled."
What. The. Fuck." and ""Get down and kneel," says Nakamura, quietly but very firmly – a tone of command that expects to be obeyed without question."(I was like, "Aw, Hellz to the No!")
Smile-""I'm really sorry," Junno mouthes. His voice is inaudible, but the words are clear on his lips, and Ryo can read their meaning in the flicker of Junno's eyes towards his ribs. Ryo's side does ache a little, now that the adrenalin has worn off; chances are he's going to have a spectacular bruise tomorrow. But it's not like it's a big deal.
He shrugs and mumbles "whatever", and that earns him a sudden, radiant smile that lights Junno up from the inside out, making him look –"
"…bzuh?!?"
LOL I'm pretty sure that's what I said! XD
I think that's the highest compliment you can make to an author.
*wishes someone would say that to me*
I've been trying! I keep getting sidetracked by shiny fandoms like this, though. *g*
Haha, I've been trying to get away from LJ so I can work on my book, but the damn fandoms... XD
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! You absolutely made my day. :-)
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Date: 2009-06-21 11:17 pm (UTC)Cry-"Ryo looks down to find Uchi watching him with a very familiar, mocking curl of the lip. His eyes are glazed and he looks more than half-dead, but that look... Ryo's caught that look more times than he can count.
For one moment, everything rights itself in Ryo's world and he can see the old Uchi in his head, smirking at him. *You want to hit that pretty bad, huh? Yeah you do, don't give me the innocent look, you little fruit. He even swing your way? Guess you'll find out! Ten thou say you can't keep it in your pants for longer than a week.*"
Kick-""Interesting," says the man standing a couple of lockers down. He's wearing a sober, dark grey business suit and is very tall, and Ryo doesn't have time to notice much more than that before he goes on. "You really think it's a good idea to seduce your sub? You shouldn't pamper him. He's far too spoiled."
What. The. Fuck." and ""Get down and kneel," says Nakamura, quietly but very firmly – a tone of command that expects to be obeyed without question."(I was like, "Aw, Hellz to the No!")
Smile-""I'm really sorry," Junno mouthes. His voice is inaudible, but the words are clear on his lips, and Ryo can read their meaning in the flicker of Junno's eyes towards his ribs. Ryo's side does ache a little, now that the adrenalin has worn off; chances are he's going to have a spectacular bruise tomorrow. But it's not like it's a big deal.
He shrugs and mumbles "whatever", and that earns him a sudden, radiant smile that lights Junno up from the inside out, making him look –"
"…bzuh?!?"
LOL I'm pretty sure that's what I said! XD
I think that's the highest compliment you can make to an author.
*wishes someone would say that to me*
I've been trying! I keep getting sidetracked by shiny fandoms like this, though. *g*
Haha, I've been trying to get away from LJ so I can work on my book, but the damn fandoms... XD
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! You absolutely made my day. :-)
Thank YOU, for writing the fic. YOU made MY day.♥