Followed the rec from Permetaform, and damn, but that girl hasn't lead me astray yet. This was brilliant!
"That is the coolest thing," Gojyo marvelled when she'd dragged him out to see the rubble. It was still smoking – a strange green glow was wafting up from the broken planks and stones, just like in a ghost story. "How'd you do that? Can you do it again?"
No one does "encouraging" quite like Gojyo. Absolutely perfect characterization through out the whole story, but this moment. This moment sold me completely. Wonderful.
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Date: 2005-01-17 08:20 pm (UTC)"That is the coolest thing," Gojyo marvelled when she'd dragged him out to see the rubble. It was still smoking – a strange green glow was wafting up from the broken planks and stones, just like in a ghost story. "How'd you do that? Can you do it again?"
No one does "encouraging" quite like Gojyo. Absolutely perfect characterization through out the whole story, but this moment. This moment sold me completely. Wonderful.