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Is anyone around who'd be willing to give me an opinion on the beginning of a very short (around 1000 words) and slightly cracky XMFC story...?
I can't decide whether or not to cut the first three paragraphs. I could really use a second opinion!
On the title too, actually. But then that's normal for me. Title-impaired should have been my middle name.
I can't decide whether or not to cut the first three paragraphs. I could really use a second opinion!
On the title too, actually. But then that's normal for me. Title-impaired should have been my middle name.
